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Turn #68 - To do list
« on: September 15, 2010, 12:18:56 pm »
Domain descriptions of:

- Avanil
- WIT
- CJS

In that order I supposed. Input/feedback/whatever appreciated.
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Re: Turn #68 - To do list
« Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 01:07:53 pm »
Your list needs correcting B.

- Avanil
- WIT
- CJS

Fixed  ;)
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Re: Turn #68 - To do list
« Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 01:13:36 pm »
Your list needs correcting B.

- CJS Aubrae's new punching-bag

Fixed  ;)

Typo there, Tristan. Sorted it out for you.

Bjørn, I'll be happy to give you input or feedback, but I am unsure as to what areas you require it. How much of the canon material for Avanil do you intend to use? And what about the expanded stuff in the Birthright.wiki?
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Re: Turn #68 - To do list
« Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 01:56:26 pm »
Your list needs correcting B.

- CJS Aubrae's new punching-bag

Fixed  ;)

Typo there, Tristan. Sorted it out for you.

*waves hand* This is not the domain that you are looking for.

Bjørn, I'll be happy to give you input or feedback, but I am unsure as to what areas you require it. How much of the canon material for Avanil do you intend to use? And what about the expanded stuff in the Birthright.wiki?

Same Q's from me Bjorn, I've already sent you my ideas but some guidelines would be nice :)
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Re: Turn #68 - To do list
« Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 06:28:49 pm »
Your list needs correcting B.

- CJS Aubrae's new punching-bag

Fixed  ;)

Typo there, Tristan. Sorted it out for you.

Bjørn, I'll be happy to give you input or feedback, but I am unsure as to what areas you require it. How much of the canon material for Avanil do you intend to use? And what about the expanded stuff in the Birthright.wiki?

The history/background parts needs to mesh with RoE history as portrayed in other domain descriptions (for example who/when people arrived in the lands that are now Avanil). Otherwise you can mix and match as you please.
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Re: Turn #68 - To do list
« Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 06:29:21 pm »
Your list needs correcting B.

- CJS Aubrae's new punching-bag

Fixed  ;)

Typo there, Tristan. Sorted it out for you.

*waves hand* This is not the domain that you are looking for.

Bjørn, I'll be happy to give you input or feedback, but I am unsure as to what areas you require it. How much of the canon material for Avanil do you intend to use? And what about the expanded stuff in the Birthright.wiki?

Same Q's from me Bjorn, I've already sent you my ideas but some guidelines would be nice :)

Read some other temple domain descriptions. That should give you an idea of what needs to be included.
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Re: Turn #68 - To do list
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2011, 12:14:05 am »
Is there a PS Avanil on the site?
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