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Offline Yggdrasil (DM Andy)

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Draft domain descriptions
« on: July 14, 2013, 02:17:28 pm »
1.  Please copy in Matt if you send them to me.

2.  Where I respond, please note that I am generally doing so without Matt's input, so things may still change.

3. If you have ideas for treaties, tributes, etc please put them in even though they aren't agreed with the other side.

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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2013, 06:37:06 am »
If we submitted a DD, should we wait for Matt's comments for adding new stuff?

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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2013, 09:48:45 pm »
If we submitted a DD, should we wait for Matt's comments for adding new stuff?

I'm not sure if he's planning to amend them himself, or simply tell you the changes he wants - unless he countermands, I'd say send in your updates, but don't go OTT with multiple revisions as he's got a lot on.
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2013, 10:31:00 pm »
Ok...In that case, I will stop sending stuff, let him get through the backlog and then perhaps try to negotiate for other changes. :)

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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #4 on: July 26, 2013, 09:17:59 pm »
Firstly apologies to those who I, inevitably, miss out.

I've not seen draft DD's for everyone, DD's that I've seen are:

Alan           The Dragon (?) / Ohlaak the Dragon / The Rising Fire
Bob (RP)     Lord Commander Otmar Messer / Thurazor Regained
Bobby H     Countess ( / Sorceress) Clumine Dhoesone / Silver House of the North
Brandon     King Fulgar the Bold / Rjuvik
Linde         Thane Thuriene Donalls / Talinie
Milos          Guildsmaster Bannier Andien / Andien and Sons
Niels          Earl ( / Mage ) Torele Anviras / The Stone Circle
Viktor         Master James Ardannt / Haelyn's Bastion of Truth

Apologies if I missed anyone out, please send me any o/s DD's so I can take a look at them over the weekend and start pulling threads together, comparing looey's, assets, agenda's, etc.

Thanks all.
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2013, 10:16:43 pm »
is it possible to update James' title to Master? Marshal is a sub-title in the Bastion.



Viktor         Marshal  Master James Ardannt / Haelyn's Bastion of Truth

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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2013, 11:37:29 pm »
OK, I will try to stop adding details, but it won't be easy - I get bored, and one thing leads to another and before you know know it - its DD v3.2. ;)
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2013, 05:37:36 pm »
OK, I will try to stop adding details, but it won't be easy - I get bored, and one thing leads to another and before you know know it - its DD v3.2. ;)

Please keep them coming, any expansions, suggestions (for yourself, others, villains, etc) welcome.
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #8 on: July 28, 2013, 03:39:05 am »
That, Andy, is what I am pretty sure falls into the category of "Seemed like a good idea at the time." ;)
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #9 on: July 28, 2013, 03:41:55 am »
Actually I am sort of at a dead end, I want to detail the individual captains of the FFC, but need to know what the troop types and numbers are before i go too far on that.
Villains I might think about some, but they would by necessity be pretty generic cut outs
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #10 on: July 28, 2013, 05:00:46 pm »
That, Andy, is what I am pretty sure falls into the category of "Seemed like a good idea at the time." ;)

Fair point, but we can just ignore stuff that doesn't fit "the plan" or re-skin/point at another target etc.

Actually I am sort of at a dead end, I want to detail the individual captains of the FFC, but need to know what the troop types and numbers are before i go too far on that.
Villains I might think about some, but they would by necessity be pretty generic cut outs

Units: I think that Matt may have some plans but I suspect that those relate to Taren, the Valiant and Ksog only (if not I'll do something) so your direct units are probably good to go.
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2013, 01:21:18 pm »
You probably haven't seen mine either. And that's because I've put it aside for a while to do other nonessential things. But I will throw myself into finishing it this week.

In any case, if you're in dire need of information, just take a look at Rune's. It probably has more information about how to Cariele and how to exploit it, than I could hope to write down in a lifetime.

EDIT:
I'll send you the rough draft I have so far, so you have something to work with. The things already written wont be changed, it's just lacking a some provinsional descriptions and the likes.
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2013, 02:52:23 pm »
Sending mine in now.  It's not complete, so I am labeling it draft v1, but it's fairly robust (28 pages).  Probably another ~3-4 pages to be "complete", but this way you have what I have put together up till now.

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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2013, 05:12:23 pm »
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Units: I think that Matt may have some plans but I suspect that those relate to Taren, the Valiant and Ksog only (if not I'll do something) so your direct units are probably good to go.
I am just going ahead with sorting out all the various units, etc. for everybody. I'll send you a list of what I am assuming so far.
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Re: Draft domain descriptions
« Reply #14 on: July 29, 2013, 09:56:27 pm »
In any case, if you're in dire need of information, just take a look at Rune's. It probably has more information about how to Cariele and how to exploit it, than I could hope to write down in a lifetime.

I'd love to, but you'll notice that he isn't on the list.  The elephant must have eaten his homework.
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